Some fiction. Operation Blue Eyes Updated Jan 30

Well i have been crating some fiction and while this is partly complete You will need some background to understand.
Prior to this Saudi Arabia with Us backing mostly in money and arms attacked Iran, This however backfired as Iran was able to turn this around and attacked into Saudi Arabia and attacked the Saudi oil industry. This left Canada as the largest single global supplier of oil. But the Canadian people, predictably, saw little of the money.
The war also was a Slap in the face to Western powers who have become more isolated with a Republican president. So they dont Fund the FSA in Syria anymore. having it collapse into a insurgency.
Canada had a nationalist revolution that place a centralized state in power. They in turn reformed Canada's military and expanded it. As you see below the IL stands for Iron Legion. The best of the best formed into a miniature armed forces.
Following this expansion of the Navy and forming it into 4 sections. Gold Fleet is predominantly located in the Atlantic. White Fleet operates in the arctic. Red Fleet in the Pacific and Black Fleet is the IL naval wing. By far the smallest but made of the best men.
Canada was recently in a Conflict supporting their Ally, South Sudan, after the Government of Sudan collapsed and factions attacked South Sudan. in the End Canada managed to reestablish the government to the north with AU forces
Then the army was expanded with mandatory military service and a system that is in ways close to that of the Swiss.

However the Government, sitting on the largest oil reserve on earth and stopped supporting Israel without question and called them on the shit they were doing. This had led to 2 assassination attempts on the leader of Canada and another that was never proven but could have been.

This resulted in a year and a half preparation for the Invasion and Destruction of the Israeli state. As most would consider an assassination attempt on ones head of state as an act of war.

This is the list of the operations in the Canada-Israeli war. This is only partly complete and I will ad more as I finish it. Also asking for opinions and critique.

Operation: Blue Eyes
Operation Blue Eyes consists of several sub operations.
1 Operation Zig Zag.
Operations Zig Zag is a communications and coordination effort by Canadian National Intelligence, IL intelligence division, Canadian Army Intelligence, Canadian Navy Intelligence, Canadian Airforce Intelligence and Canadian Cyber Command to establish lines of communication to other states and/or Non-state actors to aid in operations against IDF and Zionist irregular forces.
This operation successfully set up lines with Sudan, Syria, Iran, Hamas, PFLP and Hezbollah.
2 Operation: Seal Hunt
Operation Seal Hunt is pre-offensive intelligence gathering operation on Israeli Navy Dolphin Class Submarines and their potential nuclear launch capability. Also possible sabotage to keep the subs in port to keep them from being active at sea and more easily targeted.
3 Operation: Clear Sky
Operation Clear Sky is the first phase of offensive operations against the IDF and other Zionist forces. Special forces with mixed teams of members from Canada, Syria and Iran. Several hours prior to the official declaration of war. Targets are as follow in order of priority:
Airfields with priority on attacking fuel tanks and killing aircraft pilots and denying Zionist forces Air capability. Parallel to this is the disabling of the Dimona Reactor and potential ICBM launch sites.
Naval and Ground forces bases and facilities.
Officers and prominent political leaders. As has been done in the War on Terror operations will commence to capture/kill/disable military and political leaders.
Sabotage of infrastructure: Power generation lines, telecomm, water supply and treatment, targeted bridges, ports and industrial plants.
4 Operation: Jackfish
Operation Jackfish is the first engagement of Canadian Forces against Zionist forces in the Mediterranean. Following directly as Operation Jackfish commences Operations Just Sword and Royal Dawn will being; (see below)
Operation Jackfish will see all combined Canadian Fleets attack Zionist forces in the Mediterranean under the command of Grand Admiral Arjan Singh.
Elements included will be: Canadian Navy Gold Fleet, Canadian Navy Red Fleet, Canadian Navy White fleet, IL Black Fleet and the 1st Improvised Fleet.
Objectives are:
1. Complete and utter destruction of the Israeli Navy. Ships can be captured if the possibility arises. Otherwise all are to be sent to the bottom.
2. Zero search and rescue operations conducted for Zionist forces and all Zionist craft must be cleared from the sky and sea. Also no attempt by Canadian forces are to be made to aid or provide search and rescue to Zionist Naval forces.
3. Once the Zionist surface fleet has been destroyed Anti-submarine warfare must being at full scale.
4. The combined fleets move east and begin bombardment of Tel Aviv as primary target. Secondaries: Haifa Naval facilities, Atlit (Shayetet 13 operations base), Eilat Naval facilities, Mamtam military IT, and shipyards.
5. IL forces insertion into Tel Aviv, Atlit and Haifa via Helicopter transport with Gunship escorts.
6. IL forces move in and combat all military forces in the area and prepare the area for landfall of main force.
7. Secondary forces from the Canadian Army arrive via amphibious transport, para-drop and secured docks and ports.

Note. Throughout this operation all places, structures and objects of historical or religious significants are officially off-limits for engagement.

INT 1 Operation: Sword of Justice = سيف الحق = Saif Al hak
Operation Just Sword is a joint Iranian-Sudanese operation to be conducted after official Canadian declaration of war. Following this is the Declarations of war by both the Islamic Republic of Iran and The Republic of Sudan in aid of Canada.
Following this is a join invasion of Southern Israel via the Red Sea into Elat and north into the Negev Region. Alongside this will be long range missile attacks against important Zionist targets from both Iran and Sudan.
INT 2 Operation: Royal Dawn
Operation Royal Dawn in a Syrian operation to engage Zionist forces in northern Israel and to secure the Golan Heights to Syrian Control and limited naval support to the Canadian fleet along with uses of airbases for Canadian and Iranian aircraft.
Following this operation is continued air support of other invasion forces. Given the current state of the Syrian military limited use has been advised. Over extending Syrian land and naval forces would result in high Syrian casualties, possible military defeat of Syrian forces and diverted forces to combat the insurgency inside Syria.

5. Operation: Arrowhead
Operation Arrowhead is the following deployment of the Canadian Armed forces, under the command of General Sean McOllin, to Tel Aviv and Haifa. Orders are to secure they cities and attack the HaKirya compound and Haifa Naval facilities. (IDF high command) Instructions are to first call for the surrender of all people located in the structure are to surrender. If not then naval support and small scale demolition is to be used to destroy the structure.
Alongside this is the order to secure Ben Gurion Airport. The need for this is to stop the potential influx of foreign Zionist sympathizers, support for the regime in material, and to open up a line of support for our forces.
Under command of Colonel Hadrian Raum, who will lead the IL 1st Mechanized Iron Legion Infantry with elements of the Canadian Army’s Armoured forces, will move in to any area of the city that have problematic areas. ((I am debating how to re structure the army, could use some advice on this))
6. Operation: Black Lion (General ground offensive)
Operation Black Lion is the commencement of combat operations outside of Tel Aviv and Haifa. The objective is to move in and first secure satellite towns around the cities and allow for a large scale civilian evacuation from both the cities and towns.
Engagement of Zionist forces is expected and maximum force must be brought to them and crush them with all the power at our disposal.
Canadian forces are to move out from the two cities and secure territory north toward the Lebanon border and s along the coast to Gaza and East to Ramla and the West Bank.
During this time the air war will begin in earnest with a 24 hour bombing campaign with coordination from Syrian, Iranian and Sudanese forces.
Primary goal is to gain a solid foothold into Zionist territory and draw the IDF into committing its forces for us to destroy in battle without allied forces drawing too much risk to themselves.
7. Operation: White Noise
Operation white noise is a psychological operation with all forms of dissemination at our disposal. Objectives are to encourage the surrender and evacuate large population centers, to encourage cooperation with Canadian and allied forces and to inform the population what our forces will deem as hostile:
Openly carrying a weapon in the presence of our forces.
Verbal or physical hostility towards our forces.
Not turning over weapons.
Flying the Flag of the state of Israel.
Construction of road barricades and defenses.
Obstructing our forces.
Attacking civilians or civilian property.
8. Operation: Red Brick
Operation Red Brick is the razing of Tel Aviv and Haifa. First phase is to burn out and destroy economic and industrial buildings (Tel Aviv Stock exchange chief among them) and high density housing like apartment complexes after evicting its residence.
Second stage is the burning of homes and emptying of storage facilities for food, arms and materiel in aid of the war effort and to deny the enemy.
9. Operation Upper Cut
Operation Upper Cut is the movement of fresh forces from Haifa to Northern Israel to capture Akko, Nahariyya, Nazareth, Afula, Tiberias and Qiryat Shemona. Canadian Army forces are to engage and clear out all Zionist forces in the areas with extreme prejudges. All forces are ordered to demolish all modern settlements and Kibbutz in their path.
Any and all armed settlers who do not surrender or fly the Israeli flag are considered hostile.
Also during this operation Canadian forces are to aid and facilitate any and all friendly forces they come into contact with. Be they Syrian Army, Hezbollah or other Arab militias.
Securing the border with Lebanon is paramount. This will allow forces from abroad who wish to aid in the liberation of Palestine an avenue to enter the country and be trained by our forces. This will also allow for refugees to escape into Lebanon under our supervision.
IMPORTANT: Canadian forces are under no circumstances to engage with UN forces. At most Radio and Verbal communication is the only allowable form of communication. Provision for food, water and medical aid from UN forces is to be met with the best possible ability of our forces in the given circumstances.
10. Operation: Serpent Head
Operation Serpent head is the drive south ward to capture central and south Israel and hit control all crossings into the West Bank territory.
Targets for capture include: Ashdod, Ashqelon and Qiryat Gat.
Isolation of Jerusalem is paramount.
Int 3. Operation Gold Eagle.
Sudanese and Iranian armed forces move north from Elat to capture Yotvata and convert it to a central operations base for Iranian and Sudanese forces.
Following this is an advance north engaging all Zionist forces north and to capture as much territory as possible.
11. Operation Steel Toe.
Operation Steel Toe is to train and equip irregular volunteers who have come to aid our forces. In preparation for the large amounts of Chinese arms have been purchased to equip these forces. Who will be under the command of Canadian and Iranian training officers. These forces are to act in an assistive role to our forces.
Leaving these forces to their own devices could lead to unwanted civilian casualties and combat ineffectiveness.
12. Operation: Re-curve
Operation Re-curve is the advance into the West Bank territory to remove all Zionist control from the region.
Attacking from the north Canadian forces are to destroy walls and barriers that separate the territory.
Wide spread support is expected from the Arab population in the area so only Zionist forces are expected to be of any problem.
Following this is the subsequent occupation of the territory and taking on of policing rolls.
13. Operation Fulcrum:
Once Operation Re-curve is complete then it is time to move into West Jerusalem and slowly begin fighting into the west. A slower pace will prevent excessive casualties.
To the south Coordination between Canadian, Iranian and Sudanese forces are to tighten around Beersheba, Zin and Zefa. Tightening the hold on the last Zionist strongholds and begin to siege the remaining settlement.
13b. Once Operation Re-curve is complete allied forces are to begin a hardened offensive to capture both East and West Jerusalem. But Allied forces are to allow Zionist forces to retreat into Dimona but no enemy forces are permitted to leave the city.
14. Operation. Æsir
After the liberation of Jerusalem and the continuing siege of Dimona the remaining ruminants of Zionist forces are to official be given an opportunity to surrender. They are to be given 24 hours from the first call for their surrender.
If they Zionist forces come to the table the Diplomatic corps are to take to the negotiations. This however is viewed as unlikely.
If the fail to comply then the Canadian Army Space Warfare unit is under order to deploy the Weapon, Codename: Mjölnir.
((Ok, Mjölnir is a little idea I have had going.
Ok see the sea dragon rocket:
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Canada built a copy as this is a rather simple rocket. But it can lift about 550 tons. The MOAB is just under 10, so in theory it can carry 55. (Canada also has a copy of that.)
Launch it into space, pick a target and then have the final stage deploy then over the target but allow them to self guide them for maximum target coverage.
This would be the largest conventional weapons system in the world.))
After this weapons deployment a mop-up operation may be needed and the stages of the rocket are to be recovered.
With this Zionism has ended. The Palestinian people are free from their oppression and the Great Northern Wolf has truly awakened and shown the world it has a rightful place to take!

Damn, dont swarm me all at once.

Well, Russia produces 12% of the world's oil, so I wonder how they're doing in your world there.

The US loves the Holy Land too much to let the Canadians leave syrupy footprints across it, and would DEFINITELY intervene, which might lead to a DMZ of sorts. The great lakes would be a MAJOR point of contention at that point, since it's pretty easy to hop the border during large boating events and festivals. An awesome little part might be the battles for Alaska, and you could even do humorous quotes from Sarah Palin about it.

I'm wondering how the Syrian uprising ends in your story, taking they are part of OP Royal Dawn.

Does Canada secede from the North Atlantic Treaty Organization? Is it now allied with Palestine?

Does Canada try to prove Israel was behind the assassination attempts? Or does it hide any evidence from the outside world? How do other countries react?

Overall, I think you're missing all of the political upheaval that comes with the territory of war.

As for the mini-armed forces, what is the point of them? Are they sub-divisions under the Canadian Army, or are they separate? Because you specifically say "Canadian Army Intelligence," but never really mention the Army again. And who are the "Zionist irregulars?"

"Airfields with priority on attacking fuel tanks and killing aircraft pilots and denying Zionist forces Air capability. Parallel to this is the disabling of the Dimona Reactor and potential ICBM launch sites."
---Saying 'killing aircraft pilots' kind of sounds...well silly. *Targets include personnel berthing* or *barracks and command centers* The terminology just seems half-cocked. If you're writing it as a story, then you would say something in technical terms and then explain it using dialogue between characters.


All I can think of at the moment...oh, and it's 'utter destruction,' not 'udder destruction.'

I think i will go through this step by step.

Well, Russia produces 12% of the world's oil, so I wonder how they're doing in your world there.
Russia is doing ok but the US being dependent on Russia in any way is heresy.
The US loves the Holy Land too much to let the Canadians leave syrupy footprints across it, and would DEFINITELY intervene, which might lead to a DMZ of sorts. The great lakes would be a MAJOR point of contention at that point, since it's pretty easy to hop the border during large boating events and festivals. An awesome little part might be the battles for Alaska, and you could even do humorous quotes from Sarah Palin about it.
This plan is unfinished and is the drawn up plan before the beginning of the war. At the time of this nothing has yet happened. Working on that next.
I'm wondering how the Syrian uprising ends in your story, taking they are part of OP Royal Dawn.
The uprising stagnated and even a few groups started fighting amongst themselves. Now it is a limited insurgency, roadside bombs, assassinations all that fun stuff.
Does Canada secede from the North Atlantic Treaty Organization? Is it now allied with Palestine?
Nope, still part of Nato, with the assassination as a direct attack they quickly change their position on Israel including it's right to exist. As for Palestine the Enemy of my enemy is my friend.
Does Canada try to prove Israel was behind the assassination attempts? Or does it hide any evidence from the outside world? How do other countries react?
They managed to capture the assassin on the final attempt and for one he had a mossad tattoo on his arm that was too old to be faked for the operation and he confessed under torture. With solid proof that Israel attempted to kill the head of state is a rather solid Casus Belle.

Overall, I think you're missing all of the political upheaval that comes with the territory of war.
Politics will come later. the plan is that even if the Western powers intervene the plan is to break Tel Aviv, the economic head of Israel. if that city is damaged heavily the State of Israel will be knocked back 50 years and unable to be the power it once was. Even if the world jumps in and makes a peace treaty, Tel Aviv is gone.
And the Us dose not have the money to pump into Israel to rebuild it. Even if they did it would make the US economy even weaker, giving Canada more leverage in the long run.
As for the mini-armed forces, what is the point of them? Are they sub-divisions under the Canadian Army, or are they separate? Because you specifically say "Canadian Army Intelligence," but never really mention the Army again. And who are the "Zionist irregulars?"
The IL is the best of the branches of the Army Navy and Airforce. The idea is that they are the tip of the spear, get the best gear and training. To be the tip o the spear. The army will come in later once I finish writing it up. As for the irregulars they will be armed settlers and armed civilians who are more than likely loyal to Zionist ideology.
"Airfields with priority on attacking fuel tanks and killing aircraft pilots and denying Zionist forces Air capability. Parallel to this is the disabling of the Dimona Reactor and potential ICBM launch sites."
---Saying 'killing aircraft pilots' kind of sounds...well silly. *Targets include personnel berthing* or *barracks and command centers* The terminology just seems half-cocked. If you're writing it as a story, then you would say something in technical terms and then explain it using dialogue between characters.
The dialog is after the full operation is written out. just trying to get opinions from fellow /k/ommandos.
As for killing the pilots the IDF's major advantage is their domination of the air. And if you dont have any one to fly your aircraft then that advantage is gone. Same thing happened to japan, they could replace their aircraft quickly but not their pilots.
All I can think of at the moment...oh, and it's 'utter destruction,' not 'udder destruction.

Thanks for the note on that typo.

I'll be interested to read more.

I just hope I didn't come off too dick-ish in the way I chose to say things.

My only question is still what the US is doing (them being the self-appointed world police and all), but I can wait until the actual stories if you don't want to reveal too much.

Thats some pretty good stuff there, I'm excited to read more.

Admin wrote:Thats some pretty good stuff there, I'm excited to read more.

I will probably get some more done tomorrow, then get to the glorious story telling bit.

shit just got updated yo!

I'll finish reading it later today, but I thought of a song that this reminded me of (at least of the beginning of the song):

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